1、我希望能够改变坏习惯，我时常赖床，但是早起有利于身体健康，所以我要比*时早起
2、我希望能够吃更好的东西，我经常吃垃圾食品，它们不利于我的健康，我应该多吃水果蔬菜，让我的身体更健康强壮
3、A bad workman always blames his tools.
4、A bully is always a coward.
5、A close mouth catches no flies.
6、Adversity makes a man wise, not rich.
7、A fair death honors the whole life.
8、A friend in need is a friend indeed.
9、I'm looking forward to meeting you in no time.
10、There is no doubt that playing video game is going to be their biggest problem for students to affect study.
11、Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
12、We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
13、As a proverb says, storms make trees take deeper roots.
14、It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.
15、Do as Romans do in Rome.
16、He is not fit to command others thatcannot command himself.
17、He knows most who speaks least.
18、Slow and steady wins the race.
19、The chief aim of man is not to getmoney.
20、Lost years are worse than lost dollars.
21、He who makes constant complaint getslittle compassion.
22、Pride goes before, and shame comesafter.
23、well begun,half done.
24、Gold will not buy anything.
25、Time and tide wait for no man.
26、Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.
27、live not to eat,but eat to live.
28、Merits of living in the countryside can be examined in three aspects.
29、Itis conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
30、Summeris sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.
31、So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.
32、Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
33、The more books we read, the more learned we become.
34、apt to易于
35、around the clock夜以继日
36、as a rule 通常,照例
37、as regards 关于,至于
38、as to 至于,关于
39、as usual 像*常一样,照例
40、as well as 除...外(也),即...又
——英语作文 40句菁华
1、Learn and live.
2、Learning makes a good man better and ill man worse.
3、Like author, like book.
4、Like mother, like daughter.
5、Like teacher, like pupil.
6、People’s different attitudes towards failure;
7、维修之后，主要遗骸和剩余物留在了领地上。
8、无美德女孩的职责就是在郊区洗脏衬衣和裙子。
9、算术老师把艺术家的`人造物品有节奏地放到运载工具里。
10、在溪边，厨子在做钩形饼干之前查阅了一本食谱。
11、他叙述说他与亲戚们隔离开了。
12、如果爱不疯狂就不是爱了。
13、我拒绝控告导火索散播混乱。
14、我决不介意你不友善的提醒说我的磨刀石妨碍了你的汽缸。
15、爱是长在我们心里的藤蔓。
16、被耽搁的运动员代表团停留在操场上。
17、一加仑汽油和尼龙工作裤落进了山谷。
18、什么也瞒不过恋人的眼睛。
19、网中的湿宠物还没有登上喷气飞机。
20、不懂世故，幼稚可笑。
21、我得知有学问而认真的人靠学问挣很多钱。
22、例如，我可以即刻知道该恒定距离。
23、Claiming something is true misses the point , while presenting verifiable fact proves its correctness .
24、除了不诚实的`人外，任何诚实的人都能得到蜂蜜，人人都这么想。
25、失败乃成功之母。
26、Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
27、He who has never hoped can never despair.
28、It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
29、It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
30、On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
31、I have nothing against something.But…我并不反对某事，但…
32、I’m not entirely convinced of…我并不完全信服…
33、I cannot entirely agree with the idea that…我无法完全同意这一观点…
34、I’m not suggesting that…我并不是建议…(该句中suggest做建议讲要用虚拟，即(should)+动词原形)
35、I do not choose to…merely because I feel that…我没有选择…知识因为我觉得…
36、I can tell you from experience that…凭我的经验可以告诉你…
37、I sincerely believe that…我真诚地相信…
38、But for me,I would rather think of the matter in an(optimistic)way.至于我，我宁愿以乐观的态度来看待这一问题。
39、In the nationwide discussion,many people suggest that….But I argue that…在全国范围内的讨论中，许多人提出…。但我却认为…(该句suggest引导的从句应用虚拟。)
40、Some people think that….To be frank,I cannot agree with their opinion for the reasons below.一些人认为…，坦白地讲，我不赞同他们的观点，理由如下：
——高中作文评语 40句菁华
1、文章有详有略，言之有序，内容生动具体，不失为一篇佳作。
2、全文叙事集中，不枝不蔓，语言朴实流畅，感情真挚感人。
3、文章融情于景，边绘景边抒情，善于运用打比方的手法，使文章生动具体
4、本文取材真实生活，选材恰当，很有新意，段落分明，过渡自然，情趣盎然，可读性强。
5、全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑。
6、事例叙述生动、具体、趣味性强，且与前面的比喻…一脉相承。最后，作者用寥寥数语，表现出了自已对…的情感，令人感动。
7、文章杂而不乱，能做到详略得当，重点突出。(.)
8、XX啊，你的作文写得不错，书写工整，语句通顺，条理清楚，中心明确，标点正确，内容详实，情感充沛。你看，几乎所有优点都让你占有了。可就有一点不足，唉，我不说你也知道——错别字。怎么样？别头疼！我帮你，你也得用心啊。好了，祝你像你的名字一样——学业有成
9、你笔下的春天太美妙了，读着你的文字，我仿佛身临其境了。
10、对细节传神的刻画，恰恰相反到好处地揭示人物的内心世界，这是本文的成功之处。
11、开头简洁自然，结构清晰，心理描写真实，体现出作者良好的语言驾驭能力
12、这篇短文的特点可概括为亲切，温馨，隽永
13、文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读爱读，不忍释手。
14、结尾处集中表达情感，既照应开头又总结全文。首尾连贯，一气呵成。
15、作为随感，你的文章文思敏捷，意愿纷呈。字里行间流露出的人生体验的丰富和思想感情的细腻让老师感到惊讶。希望你再接再厉，在今后的写作中形成一道属于自己的风景线!
16、你是个很有主见又不乏真知的学生，对你的观点我十分认同，但如果行文安排中结构再紧凑些，那就是锦上添花了。
17、开头打动人心具有真情实感。
18、以饱满的激情刻画了……
19、叙沭自然生动、结构紧凑衔接自然连贯中心突出。
20、文章边叙事边抒情。
21、文章将…写得细致入微
22、大量采用生活中的口语使文章更显卦然亲切。
23、以感想开关以感想结尾。这样便使文章前后照应首尾连贯同时又使文章主题回环复沓感染力极强。
24、结尾处对人物的赞美情真意切感人至深。
25、文章含蓄的结尾既点题又耐人寻味。
26、注意观察具体事物，并展开合适的想象，这是的成功之处。
27、作者观察仔细，叙述时井然有序
28、文章真实感强，立体感强，可读性强，趣味性强以敏锐的社会洞察力，以童话反映现实阴暗面，并以生动的语言，描绘出一幅幅贪婪众生相，称得上入木三分
29、对人物的语言神态动作等，进行精心细腻的描绘，这是本文的一大特色。
30、文章开头新颖，具有先声夺人之效。使读者一见面就能对人物产生…的印象。
31、文章开头交待得十分清楚，起到总领全文的作用。
32、以饱满的激情，描写了……
33、对于景色的描写，语言简练而准确，联想则为触景生情，情景自然融合。
34、充分运用动静结合的写法，并辅以比喻、拟人等手法
35、事例叙述生动具体趣味性强，且与前面的比喻…一脉相承。最后，作者用寥寥数语，表现出了自已对…的情感，令人感动。
36、你的文章象一条缓缓而流的小溪，清秀，流畅。文笔优美，感情真挚细腻，具有个人风格。愿你在写作路上继续采撷生活中的朵朵浪花，让自己的风格更趋完善!
37、涉世不深的少年走近复杂的社会，这本身就是一种睿智。文章语言*实而柔和，描写很随意，似乎引领着读者在心灵的原野上漫步。不足是议论略感缺乏棱角。要知道，精粹的议论可起到画龙点睛的作用，会使你的文章更加深刻。继续练笔，你会更出色!
38、读你的文章真是一种享受。首先是思想感情的愉悦，当然来自你文章深邃新鲜的立意。所谓“登山则情满于山，观海则意溢于海”，你是个生活的有心人，你用真情打动了别人，这是你作文的最大成功。
39、虽然你能身心愉悦地生活在自己的天地里，但社会的发展已经全球化，所以你应该以崭新的姿态投入到集体生活之中，适应社会的发展。
40、语言得体而富有浪漫色彩，文脉畅通，彰显出知己“书虫”的形象以及“我”与“知己”的“知”“己”之情分，灵动、俊雅。
——高中英语作文万能句子 40句菁华
1、关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……在他们看来……
2、……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，(也是)非常重要的。首先……而且……最重要的是……
3、完全同意……这种观点(陈述)，主要理由如下：
4、但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于(喜欢)……
5、如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……
6、We met at the wrong time,but separated at the right time.The most urgent is to take the most beautiful scenery; the deepest wound was the most real emotions.
7、Time would heal almost all wounds.If your wounds have not been healed up,please wait for a short while.
8、No need to have a reason to love you.Anything can be a reason not to love you
9、Never think hard about past.It brings tears… Don’t think more about future.Itbringsfears… Live this moment with a smile.It brings cheers.
10、No matter how long the rain lasts,there will be a rainbow in the end.No matter how sad you may be,believe,that happiness is waiting.
11、Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass.it's about learning to dance in the rain.
12、one who thinks he can live without others is mistaken.one who thinks others cannot live without him is more mistaken.如果认为自己不需要任何人也可以生活，你错了。如果认为别人没有你不能生活，你更是错了。
13、.don’t you want to take a leap of faith?or become an old man,filled with regret ?你不想为你的信仰冒一下险吗？难道想等你老了，再后悔莫及吗？
14、whenever you find your wrongdoing,be quick with reparation!无论何时你发现自己做错了，竭尽所能去弥补；动作要快！
15、never explain yourself.your friends don’t need it,and your enemies won’t believe it.永远无需解释你自己，(因为)朋友用不着你解释，敌人也不会相信的。
16、.i want to be your favorite hello & your hardest goodbye.我愿成为你最喜欢的hello，和你最难的goodbye。
17、.the most unhappy people are the ones who always undervalue what they have.大多数不开心的人，往往低估了自己所拥有的，又高估了别人所拥有的。
18、learn from the mistakes of others.从别人所犯的错误中学习
19、the best relationship usually begins unexpectedly.最好的关系往往开始得出人意料。
20、.it’s a new day,and it will get better.是新的一天了，会好起来的。
21、be the best version of you.做最好版本的你。
22、the happiest people don’t have the best of everything,they just make the best of everything.最幸福的人并不是拥有最好的一切，只不过他们可以把一切都变成最好。
23、For a long time the language in America stayed the same,while the language in England changed.
24、Here he worked on a short film,which won him a job as the youngest film director in the world.经典语句大全.
25、I cycled as fast as I could and saw that the driver in the yellow car was waiting at the red light.
26、If only they could find a way to get to the room,or whatever it was,behind the wall.
27、Pasted inside the passport is the traveler’s picture.
28、Beans looked much/exactly the same as gold in terms of colour.
29、With a long history，bean curd is rooted deep in Chinese culture.
30、A lot of people seem to think that……(很多人似乎认为……) 8:It is universally acknowledged that +句子(全世界都知道...)
31、Attitudes towards (drugs)vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards(failure)(人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异)
32、In short,it can be said that……(总之，他的意思是……)
33、The girl is improving remarkably.这个女孩大有进步。
34、可用作状语的有副词、名词、代词、数词、形容词、不定式、分词、介词短语、从句等。
35、数词用作同谓语。
36、不定式与动名词用作同谓语。
37、介词短语用作定语。
38、I found the book very interesting.我发现那本书很有趣。(形容词短语用作宾补)
39、The comrades wanted Dr.Bethune to take cover.同志们要白求恩大夫隐蔽一下。(不定式用作宾语补语)
40、I call this roadfdsing Peter to pay Paul.我把这个叫做拆东墙补西墙。(动名作宾补
——英语作文常用谚语 100句菁华
1、The older, the wiser 姜是老的辣。
2、A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step千里之行始于足下。
3、It is hard to please all 众口难调。
4、Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。
5、Call back white and white back 颠倒黑白。
6、More hasty,less speed.
7、Slow and steady wins the race.
8、An idle youth,a needy age.
9、Pride goes before, and shame comesafter.
10、Practice makes perfect.
11、One good turn deserves another.
12、Take time when time cometh, lest time steal away.时来必须要趁时，不然时去无声息。
13、When an opportunity is neglected, it never comes back toyou.机不可失，时不再来;机会一过，永不再来。
14、Make hay while the sun shines.晒草要趁太阳好。
15、Work today, for you know not how much you may be hindered tomrrow.今朝有事今朝做，明朝可能阻碍多。
16、Procrastination is the thief of time.因循拖延是时间的大敌;拖延就是浪费时间。
17、Wisdom is more to be envied than riches.知识可羡，胜于财富。
18、If you want knowledge, you must toil for it.若要求知识，须从勤苦得。
19、No smoke without fire. 无风不起浪。
20、Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。
21、Wise men love truth, whereas fools shun it. 智者热爱真理，愚者回避真理
22、Necessity is the mother of invention. 需要是发明的动力。
23、Truth never fears investigation. 事实从来不怕调查。
24、Nothing is impossible for a willing heart. 心之所愿，无所不成。
25、One today is worth two tomorrows. 一个今天胜似两个明天。
26、A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush. 一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。
27、Good health is over wealth. 健康是最大的财富。
28、Books and friends should be few but good. 读书如交友，应求少而精。
29、Caution is the parent of safety. 小心驶得万年船。
30、An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果，不用请医生。
31、No news is good news. 没有消息就是好消息。
32、Every man has his faults. 金无足赤，人无完人。
33、Every man is the architect of his own fortune. 自己的命运自己掌握。
34、Knowledge makes humble, ignorance makes proud. 博学使人谦逊，无知使人骄傲。
35、Honesty is the best policy. 做人诚信为本。
36、He is wise that is honest. 诚实者最明智。
37、Make hay while the sun shines. 良机勿失。
38、Speech is silver, silence is gold. 能言是银，沉默是金。
39、Patience is the best remedy or medicine。
40、Penny and penny laid up will be many.
41、Poetry is sim* the most beautiful, impressive and widely effective mode of saying things, and hence its importance.
42、A hedge between keeps friendship green
43、A constant guest is never welcome
44、It is good to learn at another man’s cost
45、To err is human, to forgive is divine
46、Other times, other manners.
47、Every man is the master of his own fortune
48、Strike while the iron is hot
49、Fear is often greater than the danger
50、If winter comes, can Spring be far behind?
51、All rivers run into the sea
52、Children and fools cannot lie.
53、Don‘t count your chickens before they are hatched.
54、Do as the Romans do.
55、to look one way and row another.
56、speak of the devil.
57、Clothes make the man.
58、By reading we enrich the mind；by conversation we polish it.
59、to kick against the pricks.
60、Care will kill a cat.
61、self-trust is the first secret of success.
62、Discontent is the first step in progress.
63、beyond one’s grasp.
64、Children are what the mothers are.
65、Books and friends should be few but good.
66、Content is better than riches.
67、Christmas comes but once a year.
68、读书健脑，运动强身。
69、不怕贼偷，就怕贼惦心。
70、人是实的好，姜是老的辣。
71、你敬人一尺，人敬您一丈。
72、出门看天色，炒菜看火色。
73、单丝不成线，独木不成林。
74、好的开始等于成功的一半。
75、宁救百只羊，不救一条狼。
76、紧行无好步，慢尝得滋味。
77、试试就能行，争争就能赢。
78、不看人亲不亲，要看理顺不顺。
79、年轻是本钱，但不努力就不值钱。
80、一个鸡蛋吃不饱，一身臭名背到老。
81、万句言语吃不饱，一捧流水能解渴。
82、但使龙城飞将在，不教胡马度阴山。
83、半匹红绡一丈绫，系向牛头充炭直。
84、孩儿立志出乡关，学不成名誓不回。
85、逢着瞎子不谈光，逢着癞子不谈疮。
86、Better have no money than be shameless.
87、Force is strong, courage is frightening.
88、Although the scale is small, it can press jacks.
89、Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.
90、But let Longcheng fly in, do not teach Huma to Duyin Mountain.
91、He who is not afraid of thieves is afraid of Thieves'concern.
92、People depend on their hearts and trees depend on their roots.
93、Reading strengthens the brain and exercise strengthens the body.
94、Do not deceive mountains or waters, and do not deceive people or hearts.
95、An honest man does not do secret things, but a real man does not tell lies.
96、Whenever blind people talk about light, whenever sick people don't talk about sores.
97、The moonlight shocked magpies and the breeze chirped cicadas in the middle of the night.
98、Thieves can't hide from the countryside, nor can they steal food from their tongues and teeth.
99、If you are afraid of not knowing the goods, you are afraid of comparing the goods with the goods.
100、Children are determined to go out of the country, but they will never return if they fail to learn well.
——大学英语作文格言 50句菁华
1、Life is real, life is earnest.
2、Life is the art of drawing sufficient conclusions form insufficient premises.
3、Nurture passes nature.
4、A man is only as good as what he loves.
5、A guest should suit the convenience of the host.
6、A letter from home is a priceless treasure.
7、Do one thing at a time, and do well.
8、Faith can move mountains.
9、Good wine needs no bush.
10、It is never too late to mend.
11、One who has seen the ocean thinks nothing of mere rivers.
12、Out of sight, out of mind.
13、So many men, so many minds.
14、Strike while the iron is hot.
15、Use legs and have legs.
16、What is done cannot be undone.
17、Time and tide wait for no man.岁月无情；岁月易逝；岁月不待人。
18、Time tries all.时间检验一切。
19、All time is no time when it is past.光阴一去不复返。
20、Have you somewhat to do tomorrow, do it today.明天如有事，今天就去做。
21、Learn wisdom by the follies of others.从旁人的愚行中学到聪明。
22、Let bygones be bygones.过去的就让它过去吧。
23、Actions speak louder than words。事实胜于雄辩
24、The hard part isn’t making the decision. It’s living with it.做出决定并不困难，困难的是接受决定。
25、One who has seen the ocean thinks nothing of mere rivers. 曾经沧海难为水
26、Man proposes, God disposes. 谋事在人，成事在天
27、Beauty lies in the love's eyes. 情人眼里出西施。
28、A good beginning makes a good ending. 善始者善终
29、Sharp tools make good work.工欲善其事，必先利其器。
30、Custom makes all things easy.习惯成自然。
31、The greater the power, the more dangerous the abuse.权力越大，滥用职权的危险就越大。
32、Live and let live. 自己生活也让别人生活。
33、Believe in yourself.相信你自己!
34、What we acquire without sweat we give away without regret.得之不费力，弃之不可惜。
35、Winners do what losers don't want to do.胜利者做失败者不愿意做的事!
36、Throughout life, we rely on small groups of people for love, admiration, respect, moral support and help.整个一生， 我们都有赖于从一些人群中获得友爱赏识尊重道义支持和帮助。
37、Life is a journey, not the destination, but the scenery along the should be and the mood at the view.人生就是一场旅行，不在乎目的地，在乎的应该是沿途的风景以及看风景的心情。
38、Desire has no rest.人的欲望无止境。
39、A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.吃一堑，长一智。
40、When at Rome, do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。
41、Sense comes with age. 老马识途
42、Do not teach fish to swim.不要班门弄斧。
43、A good medicine tasks bitter.良药苦口。
44、Never say die.永不气馁!
45、Do not believe what is passed from mouth; Do not believe rumors ; Do not believe the infallibility of texts.不要轻信别人的道听涂说，不要相信谣言，不要以为书是绝对可靠的。
46、Faults are thick where love is thin.一朝情意淡，样样不顺眼
47、Hear all parties. 兼听则明
48、Industry is the parent of success. 勤奋是成功之母
49、Never hit a man when he is down. 不要落井下石
50、In the end, it’s not the years in your life that count. It’s the life in your years.到头来，你活了多少岁不算什么，重要的是，你是如何度过这些岁月的。
——英语作文中谚语 40句菁华
1、人要实心，火要空心。
2、失事容易，得事艰难。
3、宁可认错，不可说谎。
4、种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。
5、耳听为虚，眼见为实。
6、丢掉现在，也就失去未来。
7、宁吃开眉粥，不吃皱眉饭。
8、山高流水长，志大精神旺。
9、常在河边站，哪有不湿鞋。
10、文官三只手，武官四条腿。
11、欺山莫欺水，欺人莫欺心。
12、火越烧越旺，人越干越壮。
13、病急乱投医，逢庙就烧香。
14、稻多打出米，人多讲出理。
15、不怕百事不利，就怕灰心丧气。
16、冷，冷在风里，穷，穷在租里。
17、吃要吃有味的，说要说有理的。
18、宁给穷人一斗，不给富人一口。
19、不图便宜不上当，贪图便宜吃大亏。
20、人前若爱争长短，人后必然说是非。
21、劳动钱，万万年，贪污钱，在眼前。
22、Don't believe it, don't believe it all.
23、Cold, cold in the wind, poor, poor in rent.
24、It can only save people, not drag them down.
25、If you lose the present, you lose the future.
26、Ignorance is like a house without foundation.
27、If you lose nothing, you'll miss a thousand miles.
28、A stranger does not dare, and his strength is in vain.
29、It is better to be a broken jade than a complete tile.
30、He who steals is not fat, but who is a thief is not rich.
31、You respect people one foot, people respect you one foot.
32、If an axe chops down a tree, it is reasonable not to fall.
33、Misers accumulate wealth, which is of no benefit to themselves.
34、Civilian officers have three hands and military officers have four legs.
35、Poor people do not climb high relatives, rain does not climb high piers.
36、Every day depends on the sun and the moon, and every man on his conscience.
37、If you are not afraid of pepsi's disadvantage, you are afraid of frustration.
38、To know what's going on in the mountains, ask the old peasants in the countryside.
39、Suddenly, as the spring breeze comes overnight, thousands of trees and pears blossom.
40、If a man loves to contend for advantages and disadvantages before, he must say yes and no after.
——英语作文常用的五类短语 40句菁华
1、社会进步有体现 a symbol of society progress
2、重视 attach great importance to… / put emphasis on
3、是…的原因Account for /result from
4、painful lessons set alarm bells ringing (because….)
5、Call for rethinking
6、The punishment on sb should be severer
7、For the sake of
8、concern about
9、spare no effort to beautify our environment
10、teachers and parents should set an example of good behaviors to children
11、percent fail to know…..while 70 percent …..
12、finish off 吃完，喝完
13、stop doing sth. 停止做某事
14、langht at 嘲笑
15、be used to 习惯于
16、ask for leave 请假
17、send for 派人去请(叫
18、wait for 等候
19、on the whole /all in all总起来说
20、by accident 偶然
21、every now and then 时而,偶尔
22、attach great importance to… 重视
23、change our previous living habits of wasting things
24、leave…for 离开……去……
25、catch up with 赶上
26、filled……with 把……装满
27、worry about 担忧……
28、look after 照料
29、run after 追赶，跟在后面跑
30、work hard at 努力做……
31、wait in line 排队等候
32、change…into… 变成
33、hear of 听说
34、instead of 代替……
35、hand in 交上来
36、stay in bed 卧病在床
37、面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
38、引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
39、就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned， / Personally，
40、就……达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on……
——优秀高中作文评语 30句菁华
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